方舟 发表于 2014-10-12 08:22:28

黑暗(darkness)

今日第一次尝试写一个中文英文都能相对押韵的散文诗,望各位指出不足之处。

time goes by,
people changed.
i looked around,
but nothing left,
All I have,
is darkness around me.
I am fear to look at the sky,
because these stars watch me,
and try best their deride.
I feel desperate and lost in vain,
waiting for gods’relieve.

中文版:

时间流逝,
万事不复从前。
我环顾过去,
孤身一人,
只有黑暗一直笼罩陪伴着我。
我不敢去看天空,
因为星星在嘲笑。
我感到绝望并且迷失其中,
等待上帝救赎。

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